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DEAD ROSE

I ᥲຕ tᖾᥱ ᑲᥱᥲᥙtყ ɩᥒ tᖾᥱ ᑯᥲɾƙ

ᙁᥱʋᥱɾ ᥴᥲᥒ ⳽ᥱᥱ ყoᥙɾ ᑯᥲყ �
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Written by NANCY_RDZ_STORIES

(WRITER LYRICIST ARTIST)

Published 19th Jul 2022

Author's Note

LYRICS I WROTE ABOUT HOW I STRONGLY FEEL. I TRULY FEEL LIKE A DEAD ROSE....

#bittersweet #boredom #dark #emptiness #loneliness

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Re. �DEAD ROSE

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19th Jul 2022 3:05pm

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NANCY_RDZ_STORIES (WRITER LYRICIST ARTIST)

4th Aug 2022 1:47am

Thank you Sawyer....

I relate with this write all the time. I'm actually working on making it a song song so hopefully if I do, I can post on here.

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Re. �DEAD ROSE

KristinaX

3rd Aug 2022 2:43pm

Wow, this is so intimate and painful. This is something so many can relate to deeply. When someone feeds you that black water, not appreciating and taking you for granted, or perhaps driven by jealousy and control, trying to take all the beauty for themselves; shutting you away in darkness. Using it to feed their needs. But rest assured when they lose you then they will feel the real impact and you will go on to much better things. Where you can be appreciated and share real love with someone. The dead rose can always be revived with light and wetness, always beautiful no matter what. But he will have to live with what he has lost and that cannot be revived. It will just fester as time goes on knowing no one can ever truly love someone like that. That it must be 'forced' through manipulation and control but that never lasts. You are beautiful and your writing is too. I love the font, it looks amazing.

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NANCY_RDZ_STORIES (WRITER LYRICIST ARTIST)

4th Aug 2022 1:57am

Awww, thank you Kristina. I wanted to make this be good so bad. I also feel I pulled it off perfectly and am working on it as a song. So once I finish it, I'll post on here on youtube.

Yes, indeed, one never knows what they got till it's gone. You either value or you don't, cause someone will pick up that dead rose and with someones else real love it will will revive. So being abandoned too long in the dark will dry the rose unless like you said sunlight and water touches it and LOTS OF LOVE.

I can't wait to finish it on bandlab. Hope you'll see once I do post one here. Thank you and thanks for liking the font, I wanted something different and special for this write.

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KristinaX

4th Aug 2022 8:33pm

I will look out for it for sure... And please if you do post something like that, always feel free to let me know in a PM. I have a lot going with taking care of my sick Mom and work and relationship and all the other life stuff. I would hate to miss it. :)
You are beautiful Nancy, different and special I can tell, and have so much talent. <3

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Re. �DEAD ROSE

wallyroo92

25th Sep 2022 6:32am

Phenomenal write Nancy, it speaks volumes of emotion.
Well done.