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Forever
it’s the way
you look at me
beyond flesh
and bones
you see
into my soul
and I knew
in that moment
that you would live
inside my skin
forever
you look at me
beyond flesh
and bones
you see
into my soul
and I knew
in that moment
that you would live
inside my skin
forever
Published 14th Jul 2022
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14th Jul 2022 3:30am
14th Jul 2022 10:28pm
14th Jul 2022 3:57am
Dear JC,
That’s lovely. Definitely something to aspire and hope will happen. I really like your formatting and saying just enough and not too little. This poem is just perfect. H🌷
That’s lovely. Definitely something to aspire and hope will happen. I really like your formatting and saying just enough and not too little. This poem is just perfect. H🌷
14th Jul 2022 10:29pm
14th Jul 2022 7:11pm
Did you think I could use this poem in my novel and give you full credit? I would ask through pm but I'm banned from messaging for some reason. . .
15th Jul 2022 6:58pm
So Novelist-- how many poems do you plan on using in your novel? This is the 3rd one you've asked permission on. Just sayin'-- strikes me as odd...
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14th Jul 2022 11:37pm
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23rd Jul 2022 9:12pm
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- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
23rd Jul 2022 1:01pm
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