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Shadows
Sexy honey feeling horny
Bathed in pale moonlight
Teasing me with her sights
Putting on a naughty show
Swaying hips and biting lips
Stripping nice and slow
Erotic curves hidden in shadow
Caressing an ample breast
Putting me to the ultimate test
Moaning soft so I can bearly hear
How I wish to tear off her brassiere
But I know how this game goes
More I let her build anticipation
The dirtier her participation gets
On her feet now she stands
Unzips her tight leather pants
Seductively down they drop
Dirty giggle makes my heart stop
Bending forward at the waist
Damn babe, no time to waste
Shadows hide her magic place
On her back now she lay
Shadow-cast she starts to play
Stoking and stroking her desire
Waiting for me to ignite the fire
"C'mon over babe I need a lighter"
Invitation to entre I recieve
Now it is her breath I thieve
Sexy honey feeling horny
Bathed in pale moonlight
Putting up a helluva fight
To set this bed on fire tonight
What she do in these shadows
Hotter than any porno shows
I wonder if our neighbours know?
Bathed in pale moonlight
Teasing me with her sights
Putting on a naughty show
Swaying hips and biting lips
Stripping nice and slow
Erotic curves hidden in shadow
Caressing an ample breast
Putting me to the ultimate test
Moaning soft so I can bearly hear
How I wish to tear off her brassiere
But I know how this game goes
More I let her build anticipation
The dirtier her participation gets
On her feet now she stands
Unzips her tight leather pants
Seductively down they drop
Dirty giggle makes my heart stop
Bending forward at the waist
Damn babe, no time to waste
Shadows hide her magic place
On her back now she lay
Shadow-cast she starts to play
Stoking and stroking her desire
Waiting for me to ignite the fire
"C'mon over babe I need a lighter"
Invitation to entre I recieve
Now it is her breath I thieve
Sexy honey feeling horny
Bathed in pale moonlight
Putting up a helluva fight
To set this bed on fire tonight
What she do in these shadows
Hotter than any porno shows
I wonder if our neighbours know?
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Re. Shadows
13th Jul 2022 7:28pm
Beautifully worded verses and full of expression and excitement.
Love
KS
Love
KS
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Re. Shadows
13th Jul 2022 7:44pm
Makes a good poetic caption to the shadowy erotic picture (which I have used with one of my own poems). Favourite verse:
On her back now she lay
Shadow-cast she starts to play
Stoking and stroking her desire
Waiting for me to ignite the fire
"C'mon over babe I need a lighter"
Invitation to entre I recieve
Now it is her breath I thieve
On her back now she lay
Shadow-cast she starts to play
Stoking and stroking her desire
Waiting for me to ignite the fire
"C'mon over babe I need a lighter"
Invitation to entre I recieve
Now it is her breath I thieve
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Re: Re. Shadows
13th Jul 2022 8:16pm
Re: Re. Shadows
14th Jul 2022 6:45am
The picture is enigmatic in the shadow upon her body, leaving the reader to guess if she is wearing body lingerie or naked.
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Re: Re. Shadows
14th Jul 2022 3:00pm
Re. Shadows
14th Jul 2022 00:46am
Oh my, I do like the ravenous bliss of that sweet honey when poured onto your canvass
Enjoy your evening my poet... and have a fantastic Thursday
Enjoy your evening my poet... and have a fantastic Thursday
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Re: Re. Shadows
14th Jul 2022 1:19am
Re. Shadows
14th Jul 2022 2:08am
Then setting each other in fire all night and day long. Keep on writing.
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Re. Shadows
22nd Aug 2022 11:46am
This name that you've chosen for yourself is one that you keep on living up to and some.
Each poem that ends leaves me yearning for more.
Each poem that ends leaves me yearning for more.
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Re. Shadows
27th Nov 2022 5:55pm
“More I let her build anticipation. The dirtier her participation gets” – Very smart decision let her mind roam.
Enjoyed this very erotic.
Enjoyed this very erotic.
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Re. Shadows
5th Apr 2023 11:30pm
... 😍👍
My favorite verse: "... What she do in these shadows... "
... ' ... in *these shadows* ... ' ... ... Perfect. The shadows outside of DUP. ... ... ...😍👍
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But there is a mistake: "... What she DOES in these shadows ... "
Edit it and correct it.
... ... ... ... ... ...
My favorite verse: "... What she do in these shadows... "
... ' ... in *these shadows* ... ' ... ... Perfect. The shadows outside of DUP. ... ... ...😍👍
___________________________________________
But there is a mistake: "... What she DOES in these shadows ... "
Edit it and correct it.
... ... ... ... ... ...
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Re: Re. Shadows
6th Apr 2023 11:16pm
Fuck that bitch there is ZERO mistakes! Just because you can't appreciate flow ain't my fault
Re: Re. Shadows
OK, OK, Poetic_Seduction, wait a minute...
...
You wrote:"... What she DO in these shadows... "
There is an *orthographic mistake*; you should've written "... What she DOES in these shadows ... "
That was what I meant...
...
You wrote:"... What she DO in these shadows... "
There is an *orthographic mistake*; you should've written "... What she DOES in these shadows ... "
That was what I meant...
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Re: Re. Shadows
7th Apr 2023 1:45am
Again, you have no concept whatsoever of poetic flow or cadence
Sit down, be humble, learn to recognize flow
Sit down, be humble, learn to recognize flow
Re: Re. Shadows
8th Apr 2023 00:28am