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Head like a Hole
“I guess we all fall for the wrong one's.…” - poetOftragedy
Dire are the repercussions
Of the percussions
Of
Love drug
Induced concussions
Like pushed
Buttons
&
Buttons pushed
Leaving
One
The walking dead
Walking off a cliff to truly
Be
Dead
A heart felt
Hole
In the head
Head like
A
Hole
Published 13th Jul 2022
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13th Jul 2022 2:56pm
It's totally in my head now.
I appreciated the word play. It's like watching a magician walk a coin along the back of his knuckles, rolling the object up and back -- that's how the trail of thought read to me. I liked the way you picked up on each image and made a new image, that's a pretty neat technique.
The thought process was good.
Quick typo
wrong one's = wrong ones
I appreciated the word play. It's like watching a magician walk a coin along the back of his knuckles, rolling the object up and back -- that's how the trail of thought read to me. I liked the way you picked up on each image and made a new image, that's a pretty neat technique.
The thought process was good.
Quick typo
wrong one's = wrong ones
13th Jul 2022 7:28pm
Thank you Betty...
It was... Actually:
Watching a magician walk a coin along the back of his knuckles, rolling the object up and back...
:p
Your interaction with the words means so much to me...
It was... Actually:
Watching a magician walk a coin along the back of his knuckles, rolling the object up and back...
:p
Your interaction with the words means so much to me...
13th Jul 2022 3:11pm
All I can hear is Nine Inch Nails... Yesss!
https://music.youtube.com/watch?v=ZdFaadxJl4g&feature=share
Another image that grabs me by the lady balls, being a huge Dali fan... so I was immediately immersed within your word journey, digging that poetic style and connection of thought and experience down the page...
It's always such a unique treat, my friend 🙏
Now I must dance my ass off to Head Like A Hole...
🌹-💙
B
https://music.youtube.com/watch?v=ZdFaadxJl4g&feature=share
Another image that grabs me by the lady balls, being a huge Dali fan... so I was immediately immersed within your word journey, digging that poetic style and connection of thought and experience down the page...
It's always such a unique treat, my friend 🙏
Now I must dance my ass off to Head Like A Hole...
🌹-💙
B
13th Jul 2022 7:31pm
Thank you B...
As always...
Devil horns unto thee...
(And the lady balls of thou...)
As always...
Devil horns unto thee...
(And the lady balls of thou...)
13th Jul 2022 6:32pm
The words have magic and are mesmerising. They hammer the heart for that known but still not present. I love your poem.
KS
KS
13th Jul 2022 7:31pm
Thank you Kristopher...
That's real cool of you to say...
It means a lot to me...
That's real cool of you to say...
It means a lot to me...
