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My Dream
You were like a dream
Which made me hate sleep
Now youre gone
And all i do is sleep
Just so i can live that dream
One day i will die
Then i can only dream of you
Up until that day
I just wanna sleep
Which made me hate sleep
Now youre gone
And all i do is sleep
Just so i can live that dream
One day i will die
Then i can only dream of you
Up until that day
I just wanna sleep
Published 11th Jul 2022
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Just a short little poem
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15th Jul 2022 00:47am
Heartbroken leading to depression as you pine for them. I had to read this a few times to begin to understand all the intricacies of your short poem.
Welcome to DUP. Look forward to reading more of your poems.
Welcome to DUP. Look forward to reading more of your poems.
26th Feb 2024 9:37pm
It's the shortest poems that always pack a punch with so much meaning.
Wonderful work.
Wonderful work.
