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700 Years
700 years goes by so fast
I never felt the need for death
but now I finally want to see the light
I have experienced everything
and lost everything
so it seems the moment is right
as I think back in my unrest
fitting that the last thing I think about is sex
I always tried not to get too attached
but of course I did
and each one was like a dagger to the heart
forever scarring my very soul
like Elena,
she was young and slim
it amazed me how fragile her body was
yet she took all my aggression
even begging for more
bending her in all sorts of positions
kept me rock hard as we fucked
never in my life have I came so much
that's till the day she asked me to turn her
sucked her neck as I went in from behind
didn't see her much after that
for she then became a bloodthirsty maniac
I remember Victoria quite vividly
she was curvy in all the right places
took charge and rode me like a beast
requested anal every time we met
but the best was when
she let me leave bite marks on her chest
thrusting violently as I did it
she would then ask me to piss in her pussy
licking up the blood as I relieved myself
was something new even for an eternal being
she left one day
probably to continue her sexual escapades
a girl that wild just can't be contained
my final thought will always be Rosalie
she was a mature woman
there was just something about her age
maybe it was the thing I wanted
she was like a fine wine
or some victorian painting
we had such beautiful sex
touching her perfect imperfections
kissing her as I thrusted in slowly
it was a plus that she craved sucking dick
which was strangely comforting
knowing her lips were there to calm my stress
she died not knowing the truth of me
maybe that is why I loved her so
now as the sun rises
and I say goodbye to the night
I can say I fulfilled every desire
conquered every goal
and felt all the emotions one could ever feel
now I am ready
I never felt the need for death
but now I finally want to see the light
I have experienced everything
and lost everything
so it seems the moment is right
as I think back in my unrest
fitting that the last thing I think about is sex
I always tried not to get too attached
but of course I did
and each one was like a dagger to the heart
forever scarring my very soul
like Elena,
she was young and slim
it amazed me how fragile her body was
yet she took all my aggression
even begging for more
bending her in all sorts of positions
kept me rock hard as we fucked
never in my life have I came so much
that's till the day she asked me to turn her
sucked her neck as I went in from behind
didn't see her much after that
for she then became a bloodthirsty maniac
I remember Victoria quite vividly
she was curvy in all the right places
took charge and rode me like a beast
requested anal every time we met
but the best was when
she let me leave bite marks on her chest
thrusting violently as I did it
she would then ask me to piss in her pussy
licking up the blood as I relieved myself
was something new even for an eternal being
she left one day
probably to continue her sexual escapades
a girl that wild just can't be contained
my final thought will always be Rosalie
she was a mature woman
there was just something about her age
maybe it was the thing I wanted
she was like a fine wine
or some victorian painting
we had such beautiful sex
touching her perfect imperfections
kissing her as I thrusted in slowly
it was a plus that she craved sucking dick
which was strangely comforting
knowing her lips were there to calm my stress
she died not knowing the truth of me
maybe that is why I loved her so
now as the sun rises
and I say goodbye to the night
I can say I fulfilled every desire
conquered every goal
and felt all the emotions one could ever feel
now I am ready
Published 9th Jul 2022
Author's Note
Inspired by Kristina. Thanks for the inspiration 😁
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9th Jul 2022 8:10pm
A very interesting story that you have created through your unspoken words connecting the process of the mind and heart 👊🙏💪💣 you dropped the bomb on this piece 💥😁
10th Jul 2022 11:35am
Thanks, I am very glad you enjoyed my poem. It's always fun to write about vampires and creating a story.
10th Jul 2022 8:02pm
I have to agree with your thoughts and statement that it is a very beautiful thing to be able to create a story of imagination about things go bump in the night I do that with the stories I write about my own thoughts of the WOLF 🐺🙏👊
A torrid list of lovers
Well penned and gave me a rise
Kristina can certainly inspire. We are fortunate to have a
Goddess of Sex in out midst. Perhaps you are male version, albeit a hungry vampire ...
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Well penned and gave me a rise
Kristina can certainly inspire. We are fortunate to have a
Goddess of Sex in out midst. Perhaps you are male version, albeit a hungry vampire ...
BIG LIKE
10th Jul 2022 11:36am
I always loved writing poems about vampires. It's how I came up with my user name.
Thank you for the read and kind words. It's very much appreciated.
Thank you for the read and kind words. It's very much appreciated.
10th Jul 2022 00:47am
Well damn DC, What can I say... Thanks for what you did with the inspiration. I am so happy I had a part in inspiring this; I knew it would be awesome. ;) Experiencing everything does seem like it would take some of the magic out of life. But the first thing and last thing that I think about is sex. So if I have that I think I could keep going indefinitely. ;) Getting attached in the midst of eternity would definitely leave many scars and I love this back story you have woven so perfectly here writing through some of those scars in a way that keeps the reader spellbound. I like the name Elena... I think that one could be me. lol Victoria is another beautiful name. Okay really identifying with her too. :p
If you have fulfilled every desire then it was good life. Still it is so important to hold on to those desires for an eternity in my mind. That's definitely what makes life (or death) worth living for an eternity. If you lose that then it's time to see the sun that last time I suppose. Really great story telling, definitely loved it.
If you have fulfilled every desire then it was good life. Still it is so important to hold on to those desires for an eternity in my mind. That's definitely what makes life (or death) worth living for an eternity. If you lose that then it's time to see the sun that last time I suppose. Really great story telling, definitely loved it.
10th Jul 2022 11:45am
When I started thinking about writing about a vampire the thought of one who was a bit sick of life came to mind. Then I was thinking of them fulfilling everything life had to offer. I also have been in the mood to write an erotic poem involving multiple partners so I just blended the ideas.
We only have one life. Might as well live it the way we want. Suppose it would be no different for vampires 🧛🏼
Thanks again for the inspiration. Really enjoyed writing this, friend 😁
We only have one life. Might as well live it the way we want. Suppose it would be no different for vampires 🧛🏼
Thanks again for the inspiration. Really enjoyed writing this, friend 😁
