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The ring on my finger
The ring on my finger
Everytime I look at it
I think of her
I’m calmed by the thought
I find myself playing with it
Nonstop
All day
Thinking of her
I’m no longer looking.
No longer longing
For the eyes of others
The only one I want
She knows me
Knows my interest
Sees my face
And still, here we are
Everytime I look at it
I think of her
I’m calmed by the thought
I find myself playing with it
Nonstop
All day
Thinking of her
I’m no longer looking.
No longer longing
For the eyes of others
The only one I want
She knows me
Knows my interest
Sees my face
And still, here we are
Published 3rd Jul 2022
| Edited 4th Jul 2022
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3rd Jul 2022 5:27pm
Standing ovation for the last line.
"And still, here we are."
How well you painted that quiet moment of defeat.
This was really great.
Also: quick typo
I’m not longer (no)
"And still, here we are."
How well you painted that quiet moment of defeat.
This was really great.
Also: quick typo
I’m not longer (no)
4th Jul 2022 5:05pm
