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In States of Reveal
The pen moves
In paths
Of
Primrose
Bricks
&
Grimrose
Bricks
Brick after brick
Before
Horizons bent
When sent
Through
Surfaces of prism
Eyes
Spinning in spans
Of thought
Wrought
From the will
In states
Of
Reveal
Published 3rd Jul 2022
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3rd Jul 2022 11:11am
Dear CO,
This is a very cool poem. It felt kind of dreamscape-like to me. With the images you paint using your chosen words it had that dreamy quality as one wakes up from an odyssey that’s revealed a secret or better a wonderful surprise. Lovely write. H🌷
This is a very cool poem. It felt kind of dreamscape-like to me. With the images you paint using your chosen words it had that dreamy quality as one wakes up from an odyssey that’s revealed a secret or better a wonderful surprise. Lovely write. H🌷
3rd Jul 2022 2:38pm
