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My Daughter's Awakening
In the dim blue glow from our tv you laid
face down on your hands after showering.
You were all arms, legs, and a slender trunk.
You must have forgotten I was in the room.
Your lower back began to arch up and back down.
The backs of your long, pale legs tensed and
relaxed in a soft, slow rhythm and I thought
I heard you humming.
You were a beautiful ballerina with toes
pointing happily toward an imaginary stage.
In spite of the folds of wet hair covering your face,
I sensed happiness growing across your bare body
as you found the young woman inside of yourself.
It was your awakening and I was seeing it,
your early inklings of what was possible,
and what was to come.
Six years later as you readied yourself for a
special young man, I suspected how that
evening might end. Later, when I heard
whispers in the hallway and your bedroom
door close softly, I crept to the dark living
room. I touched myself, remembering your awakening
as I imagined the scenes unfolding only feet above me.
face down on your hands after showering.
You were all arms, legs, and a slender trunk.
You must have forgotten I was in the room.
Your lower back began to arch up and back down.
The backs of your long, pale legs tensed and
relaxed in a soft, slow rhythm and I thought
I heard you humming.
You were a beautiful ballerina with toes
pointing happily toward an imaginary stage.
In spite of the folds of wet hair covering your face,
I sensed happiness growing across your bare body
as you found the young woman inside of yourself.
It was your awakening and I was seeing it,
your early inklings of what was possible,
and what was to come.
Six years later as you readied yourself for a
special young man, I suspected how that
evening might end. Later, when I heard
whispers in the hallway and your bedroom
door close softly, I crept to the dark living
room. I touched myself, remembering your awakening
as I imagined the scenes unfolding only feet above me.
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