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Dime
a dime, but she ain't cheap
so fine, has every boy waiting in line
I watch from afar
knowing if I could
she would
guess she'll just have to wait
in my subconscious, in my dreams
wearing nothing but black lingerie
to keep my heart beating
she saves the world
one dick at a time
opening wide
putting smiles on peoples faces
with leaps and bounds
ups and downs
stroking my cock
to her artistry
testing my devotion
what a wonderus pandora's box
to touch,
would unleash a world of sexual misconduct
treats every man she's with like royalty
waking them with a blow job in the morning
and as they cum
she licks every last drop
that's just how it is in my fantasies
so fine, has every boy waiting in line
I watch from afar
knowing if I could
she would
guess she'll just have to wait
in my subconscious, in my dreams
wearing nothing but black lingerie
to keep my heart beating
she saves the world
one dick at a time
opening wide
putting smiles on peoples faces
with leaps and bounds
ups and downs
stroking my cock
to her artistry
testing my devotion
what a wonderus pandora's box
to touch,
would unleash a world of sexual misconduct
treats every man she's with like royalty
waking them with a blow job in the morning
and as they cum
she licks every last drop
that's just how it is in my fantasies
Published 2nd Jun 2022
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3rd Jun 2022 10:26am
Love the acute intense sexuality, DC.
It was a scorcher of a fantasy.
Nicely penned
-B
x
It was a scorcher of a fantasy.
Nicely penned
-B
x
4th Jun 2022 7:11am
It is always nice to fantasize. And I have many fantasies for sure haha.
Thanks, friend for the read 😁 always lovely to hear from you.
Thanks, friend for the read 😁 always lovely to hear from you.
4th Jun 2022 3:18am
Damn DC, this is one of my favorites. So lewd but so beautiful and elegant; what a wonderful combination. The transitions are great. The first stanza is like a seductive love poem of admiration and lust and creates a lovely imagery... That flutter of the heart and hesitation reminds me of high school. The second stanza seems so joyful while still incorporating this crass tone in a way that is 'putting smiles on people faces' (well mine at least). And the last stanza is my favorite of all... It is a thing of beauty, I love the contrast once again between the first 4 lines and the second. The oscillation works so well.
4th Jun 2022 7:22am
That's such a great compliment, made my day. This poem is one I was happy I could do. For some reason I always wanted to write a poem about admiring a porn star. Which is basically what this poem is about.
Many thanks for the smile hehe 😁
Many thanks for the smile hehe 😁
