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Concealment by Space
We encode ourselves
Between the lines
Of each breath, breathed
In belief, reaching
Ever forward to the
Definitive version
Of a series of micro
Reincarnations,
Where a million
Million eye lashes
Cross the thresh
Hold of a twinkling
Leaving us to ponder
And wonder whether
We were more present
In the time and place
Or
The
Space.
Published 31st May 2022
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31st May 2022 4:29pm
Your clever line breaks really punctuated this piece in such a cleverly enriching way. Enticing and totally catchy, Cipher
No, not back but like your poem, I feel like I might be a series of micro reincarnations... at least that's what I'm going with currently.... haha.
I just couldn't resist reaching out. Your poem speaks to me and I've missed my friend, P.
(I've secretly read all you've written from afar)
Thank you for transporting me... ✨ 💫 ✨
and yes, I am left pondering.
🌹 - 💙 - 🤗
Blu
No, not back but like your poem, I feel like I might be a series of micro reincarnations... at least that's what I'm going with currently.... haha.
I just couldn't resist reaching out. Your poem speaks to me and I've missed my friend, P.
(I've secretly read all you've written from afar)
Thank you for transporting me... ✨ 💫 ✨
and yes, I am left pondering.
🌹 - 💙 - 🤗
Blu
1st Jun 2022 8:52am
:)
You are forever a star in the sacred
constellation of me...
You shine upon me, communicate
with me...
Guide me through the dark night...
You are forever a star in the sacred
constellation of me...
You shine upon me, communicate
with me...
Guide me through the dark night...
