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This Shit is Forever Baby
What is this thing,
Encircled
In a
Ring,
A ritualized-commercialized
Entity -
Moving machinations,
Frustrations,
And dream stream formations -
To be a part
Of respectable society,
A part
Of dynamics, indoctrinated
From the
Start,
Maybe made
From
Biological imperatives,
Governed
By
Long lived governors
At all corners
Of
Worlds,
Kissing baby boys
&
Baby girls.
Published 24th May 2022
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- Edited 29th May 2023 7:45am
24th May 2022 1:46pm
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24th May 2022 7:16pm
You have have very much been there
for me on so many levels R...
That means so much to me...
for me on so many levels R...
That means so much to me...
27th May 2022 2:36am
Okay - so I fucking love the title!!!! I can't help it. It is awesome and
in your face and kinda endearing with the word baby.
Okay now to the poem.
To me it felt like you were referring to a wedding ring in the beginning. And the pressures
of society to be proper instead of living in sin. Get married and it solves all your problems forever.
And how it is like that all over the world with different governors ruling your life.
Also how a ring is a circle that keeps repeating itself for eternity. That's what I got from
that picture. Like a ripple effect. Shit maybe I'm overthinking it. LOL
Either way make me think.
in your face and kinda endearing with the word baby.
Okay now to the poem.
To me it felt like you were referring to a wedding ring in the beginning. And the pressures
of society to be proper instead of living in sin. Get married and it solves all your problems forever.
And how it is like that all over the world with different governors ruling your life.
Also how a ring is a circle that keeps repeating itself for eternity. That's what I got from
that picture. Like a ripple effect. Shit maybe I'm overthinking it. LOL
Either way make me think.
27th May 2022 4:59am
