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A Thoracic Curve
I will lift up my arm, so his hand
Finds my thoracic curve is in reach;
His touch is electric and planned
It's designed to make me beseech
His contact; he keep me from slumber
By charging my pulse, so my heart
Is ready to burst, as my lumbar's
Indulged, until each body part
Is alert, prepared and quite ready
For further demands: let his palm
Cup my buttock, then I will stay steady
Knowing his clutches won't harm;
Bringing me pleasure from pressure
I want him to be so emphatic;
He loves every sense he can measure,
But dotes on the curve that's thoracic.
Finds my thoracic curve is in reach;
His touch is electric and planned
It's designed to make me beseech
His contact; he keep me from slumber
By charging my pulse, so my heart
Is ready to burst, as my lumbar's
Indulged, until each body part
Is alert, prepared and quite ready
For further demands: let his palm
Cup my buttock, then I will stay steady
Knowing his clutches won't harm;
Bringing me pleasure from pressure
I want him to be so emphatic;
He loves every sense he can measure,
But dotes on the curve that's thoracic.
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Re. A Thoracic Curve
10th May 2022 12:16pm
I have a thoracic curve but mine has never felt that good
Great read
Love and light
Ron xx
Great read
Love and light
Ron xx
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12th May 2022 5:11am
Re. A Thoracic Curve
'I will lift up my arm...'* launches the poem with a psalm-like quality and the first eleven lines overall read to me with a tone reminiscent of the Song of Solomon..
If I understand Thoracic correctly, I can visualise the kissing up-down under the chin and roundabouts
*I could imagine a male erotic poet parodying with just one word change the line from one particular Psalm (121) - 'I will lift up mine eyes unto her hills' LOL.
If I understand Thoracic correctly, I can visualise the kissing up-down under the chin and roundabouts
*I could imagine a male erotic poet parodying with just one word change the line from one particular Psalm (121) - 'I will lift up mine eyes unto her hills' LOL.
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12th May 2022 5:09am
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Re. A Thoracic Curve
10th May 2022 1:10pm
Very interesting story from the sensual side of a woman's mind that silently process the realness of creating of a masterpiece 🙏👊🤗
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Re: Re. A Thoracic Curve
12th May 2022 5:12am
It's interesting to take a different approach and see what people make of it
Re: Re. A Thoracic Curve
12th May 2022 8:11pm
I appreciate your comment and insight into this story book moment for it's refreshing to hear a different approach to the inner workings of the subconscious thoughts of the others mind 🙏👊😉 respect dear poetess 🦋
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Re. A Thoracic Curve
10th May 2022 3:26pm
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12th May 2022 5:12am
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12th May 2022 5:13am
pleased you shared your enjoyment - thank you for your continued encouragement
Re. A Thoracic Curve
24th May 2022 6:28am
So being a dim witted fool I had to look up thoracic, and as soon as I caught up with your vocabulary I realised how sensual and sexy this piece was.
Made me envision a woman face down and tender kisses and traces up and down her spine.
Nice write thanks for the read
Made me envision a woman face down and tender kisses and traces up and down her spine.
Nice write thanks for the read
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Re: Re. A Thoracic Curve
27th May 2022 9:51pm
it felt like quite the
different way to find the
passion that's so desired
different way to find the
passion that's so desired