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We Knew What We'd Come For
You seemed pleased with how your fleshy mounds
swayed under your blouse as you giggled and danced.
We were college kids on spring break with a couple of beers in us.
Two hours later, your legs quietly parted at the Pier House Hotel.
I heard you sigh as my tongue found its way through your furry mound.
We knew what we'd both come for.
swayed under your blouse as you giggled and danced.
We were college kids on spring break with a couple of beers in us.
Two hours later, your legs quietly parted at the Pier House Hotel.
I heard you sigh as my tongue found its way through your furry mound.
We knew what we'd both come for.
Published 9th May 2022
Author's Note
Remembering one spring break night.
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I'm sure there are two typos in this line:
I heard you sign [sigh] as my tongue found its way through your fury [furry] mound.
But she does look in the pic as if she is using sign language as you are tonguing her (by its pleasuring) infuriated place!
I also sensed a double entendre (c-word) in the last line:
We knew what we'd both come for.
I heard you sign [sigh] as my tongue found its way through your fury [furry] mound.
But she does look in the pic as if she is using sign language as you are tonguing her (by its pleasuring) infuriated place!
I also sensed a double entendre (c-word) in the last line:
We knew what we'd both come for.
9th May 2022 10:02pm
10th May 2022 1:30am
