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The inner child’s ardent longing - for days that have come to pass. Hearken back to infinite summers, accompanied by contented nights. Carelessly floating on unlimited dreams, uninterrupted imagination. Flawlessly innocent, untouched by the stagnant weight this aging brings. The longing of ethereality and youthful wonder.
Published 7th May 2022
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7th May 2022 6:43am
Hoi hoi
Hope this finds you well.
Joined only a month ago, and I think your work shows a very own ‘handwriting’. I like it a lot.
Thank you for posting them.
Kind regards, Gus
Hope this finds you well.
Joined only a month ago, and I think your work shows a very own ‘handwriting’. I like it a lot.
Thank you for posting them.
Kind regards, Gus
7th May 2022 6:46am
7th May 2022 10:21am
Yes, almost everything is great. Thank you.
What strikes me is the amount of American poets who mention Shel Silverstein as their hero.
I think it’s high time for me to delve into his work.
Great!
Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus
What strikes me is the amount of American poets who mention Shel Silverstein as their hero.
I think it’s high time for me to delve into his work.
Great!
Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus
9th May 2022 1:07pm
9th May 2022 8:29pm
Thank you! I’m a little rusty because it’s been a couple years since I’ve had time to write. Hope all is well in your world
11th May 2022 1:12am
Awesome choice of wording to create this strong piece. I can see it as some kind of motivational picture someone can hang on their wall. You did a lot within a few sentences. That's skill.
