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The search for a 4 letter word that's evol
if your looking for the word caring about someone beyond all rationality
and wanting them to have everything they want
no matter how much it destorys you.
its love.
and when you love someone you...just...
dont stop....ever
even when people roll their eyes or call you crazy
even than..
especially than !
you just dont give up
because if i could give up
if i could take the worlds advice just
findsomeone else and move on
that wouldnt be love.
that would be...
that would be some other disposable thing
that
is
not
worth
fighting
for.
Ae: can i ask you something mien gut rosenrot
The lady of the valley: yeah.
Ae:"why do nice people choose the wrong people to date?
Why do we accept the love we think we deserve and shy away from which we feel we don't?
(whispers on the wind)
true love isnt real unless it is returned
Ae: do you agree?
Fraulien gut rosenrot:
i dont no believe in love
Ae:
If we cease to believe in love, why would we want to live?
i want you to promise me something Fraulien . Promise me that
if you love someone.
you tell them.
even if your scared its not the right thing.
even if your scared that it,ll cause problems
you say it and you say it loud
and than you go from there
and wanting them to have everything they want
no matter how much it destorys you.
its love.
and when you love someone you...just...
dont stop....ever
even when people roll their eyes or call you crazy
even than..
especially than !
you just dont give up
because if i could give up
if i could take the worlds advice just
findsomeone else and move on
that wouldnt be love.
that would be...
that would be some other disposable thing
that
is
not
worth
fighting
for.
Ae: can i ask you something mien gut rosenrot
The lady of the valley: yeah.
Ae:"why do nice people choose the wrong people to date?
Why do we accept the love we think we deserve and shy away from which we feel we don't?
(whispers on the wind)
true love isnt real unless it is returned
Ae: do you agree?
Fraulien gut rosenrot:
i dont no believe in love
Ae:
If we cease to believe in love, why would we want to live?
i want you to promise me something Fraulien . Promise me that
if you love someone.
you tell them.
even if your scared its not the right thing.
even if your scared that it,ll cause problems
you say it and you say it loud
and than you go from there
Published 4th May 2022
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I've read a few of your poems, (they are engaging and unique) and have come to the assumption that you are purposely leaving in all the spelling doodads, like "your" instead of "you're" and "than" instead of "then", things that look like typos, wording loosely, etc.. and if that's a design choice to bring out the vibe of not taking yourself or the poetry, especially the sentiment, too seriously, I am behind it. like hiding your truth behind blasé, putting on a filter so nobody thinks you're too bothered about it, no matter what the words actually say. really clever way to communicate that hiding as another layer, to be honest. (If it's fluke, then well, shit)
these thoughts are really relatable, thanks for sharing, and am looking forward to seeing more of your head
these thoughts are really relatable, thanks for sharing, and am looking forward to seeing more of your head
