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Kick Me When I'm Down
This was for the 'Imagery Challenge' Competition
Down I go now, yet again
You let go now, but don’t tell me when
You enjoy it, willingly
You can feel it, while getting tingly
Your foot jerks fast, you catch my side
I take it as, the thanks you’ll hide
My pained look says, ‘Just you bloody frown’
But it’s the only way you would ever kick me when I’m down
Down I go now, yet again
You let go now, but don’t tell me when
You enjoy it, willingly
You can feel it, while getting tingly
Your foot jerks fast, you catch my side
I take it as, the thanks you’ll hide
My pained look says, ‘Just you bloody frown’
But it’s the only way you would ever kick me when I’m down
Published 15th Mar 2012
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Anonymous
15th Mar 2012 9:01pm
LeesAngel,
Well looks like you need to work on your "bob-duck-and weave" Float like a butterfly ; ) Enjoyed the ride. Thanks for sharing.
tornado
Well looks like you need to work on your "bob-duck-and weave" Float like a butterfly ; ) Enjoyed the ride. Thanks for sharing.
tornado
15th Mar 2012 9:06pm
