This feels like

........beautiful.  Nature, aesthetics-colors and feeling.  This is wide open to so many meanings.  A relationship, a revelation; an epiphany.  Very deep.  I lyke : )

Thank you... that was exactly the atmosphere I was going for.... joy comes in multidimensional ways.

Lovely poem :)

THANK YOU SO MUCH

Proof (if proof were needed) of two things. This lady is an incurable romantic - and a gifted poet. You draw us into your mood, your world. You make us feel optimistic, well, this reader anyway. 'The language of grasshoppers', 'snowflakes on the tips of summer tongues' and 'crayola Picasso being created in the core of me' were definite highlights for me.
On the critical side, I felt the first stanza and the second stanza both using 'grass' imagery was repetitive and maybe merge them? And I loved the roller-coaster stanza for its contrast and excitement. I felt another stanza about 'the rush' of this feeling would integrate the poem a bit more with a 'hot/cool' theme. My usual edit by way of suggestion. Note how you mixed up the plural of 'breath' - breathes and the verb 'breathe/breathes'.
I enjoyed your very uplifting poem.  Red


This feels like
laying on my back in the
greenest grass
watching the whitest clouds
in the bluest sky
as I
try to learn the language
of grasshoppers

This feels like flying
on a roller-coaster
down that impossible slope,
screaming.

This feels like breaths
of fresh air,
a butterfly
kissing my insides
making me breathe deep
and relish the moment.

This feels like
snow in April,
beautiful and mysterious,
like snowflakes on the tips
of summer tongues.

This feels like
a watercolor,
a crayola Picasso
being created in
the core of me.

This feels like...
it could  be
the start of something
beautiful.

As always red I appreciate your critique sooo much! You have truely helped me to become a more aware and technically sensitive writer... Kudos to you for your outstanding ability to teach and  reach me!
xoxo