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Promised
The rains are here
Just like you promised
Shall I cry with them
Or remember
At least in this, you were honest
Just like you promised
Shall I cry with them
Or remember
At least in this, you were honest
Published 26th Apr 2022
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26th Apr 2022 11:35pm
Hello there.
I found this short piece really interesting. I almost felt like the rain was a hinge that the poem hung upon. It was this anchor of sadness that carried the whole poem from beginning to end.
I’m glad this is tagged bittersweet because this was exactly the vibe that I got from this. The weight of it is heavy, regardless.
Thank you for sharing this one
-M
I found this short piece really interesting. I almost felt like the rain was a hinge that the poem hung upon. It was this anchor of sadness that carried the whole poem from beginning to end.
I’m glad this is tagged bittersweet because this was exactly the vibe that I got from this. The weight of it is heavy, regardless.
Thank you for sharing this one
-M
