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she caresses his soul
she caresses his soul before he succumbs to another storm
seducing his senses
with drawn out serenity
a soliloquy of suspense
slaying every utter defence
he not defiant
letting
her soul come to rest
on ancient shards of distress
undressed
under a waning moon
forgiving what has gone by
in only her vast and open sky
confided in the contrast
connecting what all along
was in plain sight
pain perforating night
the beats, the heartbeats
and the breath
slowed
as she sung him her song
long gone, the feelings
that felt so wrong
seducing his senses
with drawn out serenity
a soliloquy of suspense
slaying every utter defence
he not defiant
letting
her soul come to rest
on ancient shards of distress
undressed
under a waning moon
forgiving what has gone by
in only her vast and open sky
confided in the contrast
connecting what all along
was in plain sight
pain perforating night
the beats, the heartbeats
and the breath
slowed
as she sung him her song
long gone, the feelings
that felt so wrong
Published 23rd Apr 2022
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Anonymous
23rd Apr 2022 7:26pm
Hi JusTim,how are you?
Such melodic beauty.
X
Such melodic beauty.
X
24th Apr 2022 3:23pm
24th Apr 2022 7:39pm
24th Apr 2022 9:23pm
25th Apr 2022 00:56am
Hi Tim:)
So this just read so smooth. Just like a caress in a way.
My fav -
"her soul come to rest
on ancient shards of distress"
Just great all around!!
So this just read so smooth. Just like a caress in a way.
My fav -
"her soul come to rest
on ancient shards of distress"
Just great all around!!
25th Apr 2022 6:32am
