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Stuck in The Hollow
Would it be different
if the stars tied our gold and scars?
I weeped too much at the thought of it,
to the point I was suffocating on my own fears.
Can you ask any deity,
Whether the angels smiled upon me
even just for once?
I want to fall from the dark heaven
I've been trapped in.
Letting myself be taken
If it's meant I can reset my life
To be reborn with [redacted]
in every faces I was given.
if the stars tied our gold and scars?
I weeped too much at the thought of it,
to the point I was suffocating on my own fears.
Can you ask any deity,
Whether the angels smiled upon me
even just for once?
I want to fall from the dark heaven
I've been trapped in.
Letting myself be taken
If it's meant I can reset my life
To be reborn with [redacted]
in every faces I was given.
Published 22nd Apr 2022
Author's Note
A piece I wrote in the early 2022. Title was taken from a song lyrics, "I Need Air" (Demo) by Nothing But Thieves.
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22nd Apr 2022 2:35pm
Excellent and unique approach. Thanks for sharing. Look forward to more of your poems. Hugs and peace, Oral
23rd Apr 2022 2:51am
