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Early Spring Dew
Frost on the grass and buds
like diamonds glittering in the early daylight
Chilly breeze warms
upon the kiss from the sun
A smile forms on my lips
this place is like heaven....
like diamonds glittering in the early daylight
Chilly breeze warms
upon the kiss from the sun
A smile forms on my lips
this place is like heaven....
Published 20th Apr 2022
Author's Note
Close your eyes and feel it...
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20th Apr 2022 9:54pm
Beautiful poem. Brings the beauty of spring and nature to the readers soul.
Job
Job
20th Apr 2022 9:59pm
Thank you deeply sweetie. Spring to me is a time of renewal. A rebirth. Its glorious. <3
20th Apr 2022 10:02pm
20th Apr 2022 10:08pm
20th Apr 2022 10:49pm
This goes well with the wind chimes; I'm out on my back porch reading this.
Good timing. Wonderful choice of words.
Good timing. Wonderful choice of words.
20th Apr 2022 10:59pm
21st Apr 2022 7:36am
Dear ML,
Consider this felt. I enjoyed, greatly the guided imagery set in this sweet poem. The very notion spring is in the wind is much needed relief. Perfect timing with this perfect poem. H🌷
Consider this felt. I enjoyed, greatly the guided imagery set in this sweet poem. The very notion spring is in the wind is much needed relief. Perfect timing with this perfect poem. H🌷
27th Apr 2022 2:28am
Not sure why this transported me back to my freshmen year in college some thirty years ago, thinking of the same emotions and sensations when the weather is just perfect. Yes, I felt it.
Wonderful work.
Wonderful work.
29th Jun 2022 1:41am
Thanks Wally. Im happy to have helped you return to a wonderful time. <3
