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Wont YoU Stay the NiGht...
Be with me.. Indulge my fantasy..
Play in a virtual heaven.. Make sick love to me..
Breathe.. A twist of faint.. An emotional blank..
Won't you stay the night ...
Hold nothing back.. Contaminate the lack.. Of feeling..
Sinister healing.. For a blind revealing of our fate..
Slither a slit of bliss.. Seal it.. With a serpents kiss..
My heart..
Taste me.. As we're embracing as one..
Connection.. A soul infection.. No strings..
Controlling.. While holding me down..
Reach around and tell me.. "I love you!"
Even if for tonight only.. I won't be lonely.. With you...
Play in a virtual heaven.. Make sick love to me..
Breathe.. A twist of faint.. An emotional blank..
Won't you stay the night ...
Hold nothing back.. Contaminate the lack.. Of feeling..
Sinister healing.. For a blind revealing of our fate..
Slither a slit of bliss.. Seal it.. With a serpents kiss..
My heart..
Taste me.. As we're embracing as one..
Connection.. A soul infection.. No strings..
Controlling.. While holding me down..
Reach around and tell me.. "I love you!"
Even if for tonight only.. I won't be lonely.. With you...
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Once again
Anonymous
14th Mar 2012 9:21pm
This is so beautiful. And it saddens me because it's been so often true in my case. You have such a talent.
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re: Once again
15th Mar 2012 3:25am
Thank you very much miss.. i quite enjoy reading your beauty as well.. i appreciate your comments..
Touching
14th Mar 2012 11:17pm
re: Touching
15th Mar 2012 3:32am
Thank you miss.. truly.. and something completely out of the norm for me.. But i have it in me to express it as best i can.. i appreciate your comment.
meow :(
15th Mar 2012 00:51am
re: meow :(
15th Mar 2012 3:34am
Well um... =).. I definitely appreciate the sentiment .. Thank you.. Please believe that my life is how i am disturbingly comfortable.. no complaints...
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15th Mar 2012 3:26am
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15th Mar 2012 3:35am
Um... Wow. i dont know how to respond to that. I believe that everything expressed from each poet is beautiful .. But thank you so much.
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15th Mar 2012 3:39am
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15th Mar 2012 3:44am
Is there a web?
17th Mar 2012 3:47pm
Centuries ago when I was first learning to play the guitar, The Eagles "Witchy Woman", held my attention. This brought me back to that, although now I have a better idea about what was going on in the song. (I think!)
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=)
17th Mar 2012 6:09pm
Longing desire!
3rd May 2012 6:55pm
I've been in this situation far too many times and not had it fulfilled! Hope you've had better luck that me, my friendly devil! The last line is a really killer!
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Re: Wont YoU Stay the NiGht...
Anonymous
2nd Oct 2012 8:53am
Great work! Been there many times and this piece took me back. Pleasurable write, Devilish. Thank you!
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Re: Wont YoU Stay the NiGht...
16th Dec 2012 4:19am
hm much softer than some of your other but no less good... i like the line make sick love to me... i should have thought of that ;)
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