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Veins
My veins are purple trees with shaky limbs,
desperate for something-
but unknowing of what.
desperate for something-
but unknowing of what.
Published 14th Mar 2012
| Edited 19th Mar 2012
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20th Mar 2012 8:23am
20th Jul 2012 1:22pm
You can really pull off short poems. A lot of people can't but yours do the perfect thing - they leave me thinking at the end. Love it.
17th May 2014 5:25am
