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total nonsense
what does one truly want?
imagine it might be unreal
being that...
one's intellect holds one in a maze.
the trappings of the puzzle
all bundled up as a ball
waiting to unfurl
from the roundness of the curl.
circles, circling upon the self
maybe what one wants is...
is, hidden within one's bookshelf?
imagine it might be unreal
being that...
one's intellect holds one in a maze.
the trappings of the puzzle
all bundled up as a ball
waiting to unfurl
from the roundness of the curl.
circles, circling upon the self
maybe what one wants is...
is, hidden within one's bookshelf?
Published 11th Apr 2022
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11th Apr 2022 5:57pm
Dear M,
I really enjoyed this poem. It made me think how all the grandiose things I think I want usually end up as a disappointing bust and the things I’m most content with are the cups of tea in solitude. Wonderfully thoughtful write. H🌷
I really enjoyed this poem. It made me think how all the grandiose things I think I want usually end up as a disappointing bust and the things I’m most content with are the cups of tea in solitude. Wonderfully thoughtful write. H🌷
11th Apr 2022 8:07pm
I appreciate your thought driven comment.
Thank you for taking the time to read.
Thank you for taking the time to read.
13th Apr 2022 9:49am
13th Apr 2022 11:48am
Thank you for reading and commenting... always nice to have you reading my words
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18th Apr 2022 11:18pm
