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Paramnesia
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Paramnesia
She entered my life
touched me, gently
throughout the night
Daydreaming?!
She can’t just be
a dream to me –
Virtual Reality!?
It cannot be!!!!
Maybe it’s loneliness
I’ve allowed my
subconscious
to run rife & ruin
No longer
neither lament nor care
if my body disappears
long as I can stay
ever in
the
dream
unique word count: 51
Paramnesia
She entered my life
touched me, gently
throughout the night
Daydreaming?!
She can’t just be
a dream to me –
Virtual Reality!?
It cannot be!!!!
Maybe it’s loneliness
I’ve allowed my
subconscious
to run rife & ruin
No longer
neither lament nor care
if my body disappears
long as I can stay
ever in
the
dream
unique word count: 51
Published 10th Apr 2022
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10th Apr 2022 5:28pm
Just read this in the challenge, Tallen. A solid entry which addresses all of your chosen themes and more. Personal reality is a thin slab of cracked ice that could break at any moment under expectation's weight.
10th Apr 2022 5:38pm
am greatly appreciated that You "got this" spill
thank You for the intelligent and encouraging shares
thank You for the intelligent and encouraging shares
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- Edited 19th Jul 2023 3:46am
10th Apr 2022 8:05pm
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