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Transcend
moonlit night
Her silhouette
lingering in
Such loud darkness
Whispers I Miss You
So unreal
Swallow the sound
The slushing of her voice
such loud darkness
On a moonlit night
Published 9th Apr 2022
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9th Apr 2022 6:40pm
Hello
Welcome to our underground!
I love the form you've used here...
Felt like that real anxiety we go through when we meet love and we're so unsure what to do with ourselves.
Thank you for sharing.
I enjoyed the read
Al
Welcome to our underground!
I love the form you've used here...
Felt like that real anxiety we go through when we meet love and we're so unsure what to do with ourselves.
Thank you for sharing.
I enjoyed the read
Al
10th Apr 2022 12:05pm
Birthed from a 10 minute edit, wasn’t too sure if posting would be a good idea. Something about the slushing…..
Anywho, I am nothing without feedback- thank you for reading!
Anywho, I am nothing without feedback- thank you for reading!
10th Apr 2022 11:28am
Love the crispness... the depth of this brevity poem... welcome to DUP...
28th Feb 2024 11:10pm
There is something so nostalgic about the way this is worded and it’s great. Superb job
