Green Haiku

I really like this! It's like Spring encapsulated

Yeah, I love haiku for this very reason!! Thanks for the read and comment. <3

This time of year always gets me excited for what’s to come. It is always filled with such promise. Your little poem reminds us of this.

Thank you for sharing.

-M

Well thank you so much for the read and comment, spring has sprung now although its cold out, who needs reminding?! I look forwards to it which is why this was written in anticipation! Lol.

Another beautiful poem by a beautiful lady. Hugs and peace, Oral xo

Hey man, thank you and have a peaceful Spring! <3

Beautiful expression... I adored where this took me.

Thank you for sharing
🌹 -🌱 🌸🌷🌺🌹🥀🌱

-B

Aw thanks for the sweet comment and read list. <3

dear Lightning Bug

i am not a grammar junkie so i have no idea about Haiku rules

yet please let me share that for me ear this would flow a bit sweeter without 'jade'


perhaps use jade in the title rather than green


a warm smile
silent lotus

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Thanks but no thanks. I don't change titles by requesters. I see no problem with it. Thanks for reading and commenting.

i was sharing a thought of a possibility
a far cry from a request

a warm smile
silent lotus