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Divinely Fallen Love
- Divinely Fallen Love -
In times of old, when mankind was yet young...
I walked the lands where the kings of Sumeria,
And the queens of Babylon had all their glories.
There were places pristine, history not begun!
Wild places, filled with a magic and a delirium,
Intoxicating to we of whom you told in stories.
We of whom the ancient voices devoutly sung!
Who will walk with me, until cold is the sun?
Out of darkness, filled with the forbidden light...
I walked the roads between the worlds you see,
Seeking ever, the place I might call my home.
My dark wings of shadow once were so white!
But in that color, only imperfection's company,
Can be seen; its' scars that run deep as is bone.
Beneath the moon, my kind found our delight!
Who will walk with me, beyond mortal sight?
Some call me angel, some devil, some faerie...
I walked the planes of existence, saw the stars,
When before time began, we sailed black seas.
Lilith and I, and others of infernal company!
Before we came to Terra after our mad wars,
Aliens and strangers seeking renewed dignity.
You cannot fathom what I see in this reverie!
Who will walk with me, sharing my destiny?
Good and evil, these things we were called...
But in human hearts, the worst darkness lies,
And aspects of light that stay undreamed of.
Wars and destruction, of these I am appalled!
Down that path is only a world's sad demise,
Caused by those who have no sense of love.
The very earth cries out, like a maid mauled!
Shall the moon too weep, for futures stalled?
Some say: 'the gods abandoned us', in vain...
We but walk paths unseen, seeing far more,
Than if we came down from the very skies.
We live as mortals, and we feel your pain!
Our hearts are alien, and of a distant shore,
But we know love, and truth not disguised.
If this be madness, we need never be sane!
The road before us, is an unknown domain.
In times of old, when mankind was yet young...
I walked the lands where the kings of Sumeria,
And the queens of Babylon had all their glories.
There were places pristine, history not begun!
Wild places, filled with a magic and a delirium,
Intoxicating to we of whom you told in stories.
We of whom the ancient voices devoutly sung!
Who will walk with me, until cold is the sun?
Out of darkness, filled with the forbidden light...
I walked the roads between the worlds you see,
Seeking ever, the place I might call my home.
My dark wings of shadow once were so white!
But in that color, only imperfection's company,
Can be seen; its' scars that run deep as is bone.
Beneath the moon, my kind found our delight!
Who will walk with me, beyond mortal sight?
Some call me angel, some devil, some faerie...
I walked the planes of existence, saw the stars,
When before time began, we sailed black seas.
Lilith and I, and others of infernal company!
Before we came to Terra after our mad wars,
Aliens and strangers seeking renewed dignity.
You cannot fathom what I see in this reverie!
Who will walk with me, sharing my destiny?
Good and evil, these things we were called...
But in human hearts, the worst darkness lies,
And aspects of light that stay undreamed of.
Wars and destruction, of these I am appalled!
Down that path is only a world's sad demise,
Caused by those who have no sense of love.
The very earth cries out, like a maid mauled!
Shall the moon too weep, for futures stalled?
Some say: 'the gods abandoned us', in vain...
We but walk paths unseen, seeing far more,
Than if we came down from the very skies.
We live as mortals, and we feel your pain!
Our hearts are alien, and of a distant shore,
But we know love, and truth not disguised.
If this be madness, we need never be sane!
The road before us, is an unknown domain.
Published 23rd Mar 2022
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12th Oct 2022 5:44am
Lucielle,
"Divinely Fallen Love"....This piece Madam Lucielle I have to te u. Was, is, always to me will be ah stunning and each stanza's ah proof. Line for line, exclamation point for exclamation point at line's end. To I would just ah grin and ah eyely ah pleasure myself within. Listen! I ah beg u ah too, because, this ah poems ah bound. Is truly entertaining and captivating upon my ah heart ah found. Scream! Yes I did yeah I did upon each exclamation ah point. As if, I was within thine ah class having to ah please u the ah teacher ah reading from my ah heart. Now I ah let u ah get away all, because, I've ah taking up enough of your ah time. And, I ah thank u for ah letting my ah presence ah be upon thy ah page ah line! Excellent Write Mrs. Lucielle! That-A-Girl!!!!!👁️🤎🤍🥥👄🍹
"Divinely Fallen Love"....This piece Madam Lucielle I have to te u. Was, is, always to me will be ah stunning and each stanza's ah proof. Line for line, exclamation point for exclamation point at line's end. To I would just ah grin and ah eyely ah pleasure myself within. Listen! I ah beg u ah too, because, this ah poems ah bound. Is truly entertaining and captivating upon my ah heart ah found. Scream! Yes I did yeah I did upon each exclamation ah point. As if, I was within thine ah class having to ah please u the ah teacher ah reading from my ah heart. Now I ah let u ah get away all, because, I've ah taking up enough of your ah time. And, I ah thank u for ah letting my ah presence ah be upon thy ah page ah line! Excellent Write Mrs. Lucielle! That-A-Girl!!!!!👁️🤎🤍🥥👄🍹
25th Oct 2022 10:04pm
I am pleased you enjoyed reading my poem! The exclamations are all indeed meant to intone certain parts of the work that convey very powerful statements, things not meant to be taken lightly. They are lines that I have actually spoken in the past... some of them even in anger... with a great deal of passion and sometimes fury within me as I did so. All in moments when it was more than called for, too. My works are often filled with pure passion in all its' forms... with both love and anger alike being filled with equally hot fire. But fire always was my primary elemental nature, alongside water in a kind of harmonious balance. It is a delight to see that the passion within this poem was tangible when you read of its' verses. Thank you very much, as ever, for popping by to leave a comment. :D
27th Oct 2022 4:20am
U are welcome Mrs. Kara very ah muchly. Your writings are truly outstanding! 👁️🌷🤎🍑👄
