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Brimstone and Mirth
dreaming of brimstone and mirth
and sensual laughing desires
finding chaos and fire
lust burning on the pyre
purple hearts and mischievous smiles
the scent of lavender and musk
sweat soaked sheets
tinged with red
ragged gasping breath
arched backs and pounding hearts
thrusting deep inside your chrysalis soul
shattering crystal shards of light
piercing the creation of life
chaos incites insanity
in madness invoking spells of lust
tracing pentagrams of love
erotic incantations
whispered in the dark
you push me back, straddling
with slow undulating hips
the spell is cast
the doorway opens wide
reborn by creation's blinding light
with our love in the night
and sensual laughing desires
finding chaos and fire
lust burning on the pyre
purple hearts and mischievous smiles
the scent of lavender and musk
sweat soaked sheets
tinged with red
ragged gasping breath
arched backs and pounding hearts
thrusting deep inside your chrysalis soul
shattering crystal shards of light
piercing the creation of life
chaos incites insanity
in madness invoking spells of lust
tracing pentagrams of love
erotic incantations
whispered in the dark
you push me back, straddling
with slow undulating hips
the spell is cast
the doorway opens wide
reborn by creation's blinding light
with our love in the night
Published 20th Mar 2022
| Edited 21st Mar 2022
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20th Mar 2022 7:43pm
20th Mar 2022 10:31pm
Thank you dear word Dragon. Being my own worse critic, I find a kind words shine like the sun on an overcast day.
21st Mar 2022 5:54am
21st Mar 2022 9:17pm
Deep thanks.
This was .... difficult, with multiple rewrites over many days.
The more time spend on a poem is proportionate to the amount of angst I feel when publishing. Needless to say, but your kind words [as well as LDF's] have driven the angst away and I can breath again.
This was .... difficult, with multiple rewrites over many days.
The more time spend on a poem is proportionate to the amount of angst I feel when publishing. Needless to say, but your kind words [as well as LDF's] have driven the angst away and I can breath again.
22nd Mar 2022 6:15am
Yes, my friend...
Such things are certainly a part
of the complex algorithm, I have found.
I respect your transparency
and daring.
As well as your great talent.
I can feel the degree of difficulty,
quite honestly...
Like how some pieces are like
moving a building with the power of your mind.
:)))
Very cool Shaman.
Such things are certainly a part
of the complex algorithm, I have found.
I respect your transparency
and daring.
As well as your great talent.
I can feel the degree of difficulty,
quite honestly...
Like how some pieces are like
moving a building with the power of your mind.
:)))
Very cool Shaman.
23rd Mar 2022 10:37pm
"lust burning on the pyre
purple hearts and mischievous smiles"
That's a beautiful painting in my mind. Passion indeed.
LJ
purple hearts and mischievous smiles"
That's a beautiful painting in my mind. Passion indeed.
LJ
