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Time Enough For Love
do we have
enough time
to love?
in the morning
not much time
together
we are busy
breakfast
eating quickly
thinking
about other things
holding
newspaper that hides
the person we love
in the evening
coming home
stressed
tired
dinner
eating quickly
thinking
about other things
holding
fatigue that hides
the person we love
in our busy lives
do we insure
a little time to love
why do we
prioritize
work over people?
our happiness
our lives
are within
we can
begin a revolution
in our way of living
we
can
choose
to make love
top
priority
(C)2022 Raibeart Bruis
Published 17th Mar 2022
Author's Note
Mediation on a quote by Thich Nhat Hanh.
Title is the name of a book by Robert A. Heinlein.
Title is the name of a book by Robert A. Heinlein.
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18th Mar 2022 1:09pm
Dear KP,
A reflection of priorities well written. Made me think how exhaustion, frustration, chaotic schedules weren’t even a consideration prior to marriage, the door opened and passion was knocking. Really appreciated this poem and its redirection of what’s important. H🌷
A reflection of priorities well written. Made me think how exhaustion, frustration, chaotic schedules weren’t even a consideration prior to marriage, the door opened and passion was knocking. Really appreciated this poem and its redirection of what’s important. H🌷
25th Mar 2022 4:49pm
22nd Mar 2022 00:51am
I hope you are doing well, my friend ... I've been gone and just wanted to stop by to say hi and leave my thoughts of admiration and adoration for this piece...
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
25th Mar 2022 4:50pm
