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Comfortable in Our Nakedness

As we stepped silently ever
closer to each other,
I heard your breath and sensed
all the living that is within you.

We stood completely
comfortable in our nakedness,
knowing that creation’s most
beautiful displays would
reveal in us.

As we caressed, your
warming cock pressed
against me and I caught
my breath in a dizzying
moment that dropped me
to my knees. I let my
face feel your heat and
imagine you inside of me.
Written by Nizana (Lauryn)
Published
Author's Note
I wrote this for my lover after one of our first nights together.
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