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winter blooming/the betrayal of you
the betrayal of you
that led to heartbreak
caused a volcanic nuclear winter in my mind
and now i find myself losing what i never deserved;
sanity
all life has been consumed
and my world is purged of any semblance of hope
when i see that light that comes for me
will it take my bones away
after ripping me into pieces?
that led to heartbreak
caused a volcanic nuclear winter in my mind
and now i find myself losing what i never deserved;
sanity
all life has been consumed
and my world is purged of any semblance of hope
when i see that light that comes for me
will it take my bones away
after ripping me into pieces?
Published 25th Feb 2022
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Anonymous
25th Feb 2022 11:58pm
Hello there and welcome 🤗
It’s a neat little write this one. I like the exploration of the self that you take here in a few lines. I also like the question at the end and how this is a useful visual tool in wondering about the outcome long after the poem has finished.
Thank you for sharing :)
-M
It’s a neat little write this one. I like the exploration of the self that you take here in a few lines. I also like the question at the end and how this is a useful visual tool in wondering about the outcome long after the poem has finished.
Thank you for sharing :)
-M
26th Feb 2022 8:24pm
Only you know what your soul contains. Control emotion and you can see what paths lie ahead.
