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the downfall of trust/fatal mistake

and in my trust to the boy
who promised he'd never hurt me
i foolishly allowed him to place me inside of a coffin
a coffin he'd never let me escape
no matter how much i called his name
and cried out that i wanted to go home
he didn't care
his sole intent was to bury me alive
in his twisted way of showing me love
and my own regrets
slowly devoured the oxygen around me
'please let me out! please!'
i screamed
'i can't breathe!'
but to no avail
i died a violent death
who was guilty?
he killed me with lies
i murdered myself with trust.
TheWeepingYanagi
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