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Tide and Tied
Tide and Tied
A shore
Washed wet
With desires
In waves,
There's cresting
Each moment
And afterwards
Caves.
A curl
Of deep passion
Shore-breaks
And then dies,
Revived
In the moment
As energies
Rise.
Tied
To the bulkhead,
As thoughts
Come in waves,
Again
And again,
It builds
And it caves.
A shore
Washed wet
With desires
In waves,
There's cresting
Each moment
And afterwards
Caves.
A curl
Of deep passion
Shore-breaks
And then dies,
Revived
In the moment
As energies
Rise.
Tied
To the bulkhead,
As thoughts
Come in waves,
Again
And again,
It builds
And it caves.
Published 22nd Feb 2022
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22nd Feb 2022 6:41pm
I'm swiftly swept up in the clever and creative way you've constructed your thoughts to move, evolving forward down the page... Imagery that entices and allures... Palpable.
🌹 - B
🌹 - B
22nd Feb 2022 7:23pm
Thank you....really sweet words from you...riptide and surfside.....
Sleep can be like this with others...sleep a while, fumble into wakefulness, doze off again....find a rhythm....hours and minutes....feeling washed over and washed out.....palpable....yes!
Sleep can be like this with others...sleep a while, fumble into wakefulness, doze off again....find a rhythm....hours and minutes....feeling washed over and washed out.....palpable....yes!
22nd Feb 2022 9:50pm
22nd Feb 2022 10:27pm
Actually, I've been reading your travelogue....thank you for being inspiring....
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