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WHY IS IT WRONG?

WONDERING

As I share with
others my desire
to put my lover first,
and myself last,
I hear hisses, groans,
and "How dumb."
I know, I hear others
say how fast they
launched out of the
starting gate and finished
in a record-breaking
time.
NO,
not me I had rather
be sure my lover is
first and totally satisfied
before I accept mine.
My pleasure level is
raised 1000 percent
when I know my lover
has been satisfied.
Time has no limits;
actions have no limits
or barriers...
IT'S
my lover first.
No, it's not a mechanical
action produced like
a business plan to execute.
Again, why is it wrong
for me not to be the
proverbial "Jack Rabbit."
Hey, if it's right for you
and your lover, great,
keep on going for it.
But if not for YOU,
meet me at the Kissing
Place and we'll do
OUR thing. Yes, I'll wait.
OKAY?
Written by TheOralizer
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