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Pizza By The Slice
There's nothing I can think of
That's better than a slice of pizza
being fed one in the rain by
The man that you adore
unless of course
You choose to feed me more
It even tastes better
Than it ever has before
That's better than a slice of pizza
being fed one in the rain by
The man that you adore
unless of course
You choose to feed me more
It even tastes better
Than it ever has before
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Re. Pizza By The Slice
12th Feb 2022 11:08am
Dear FM,
Now this is a poem I can relate to. Pizza and my favorite guy feeding it to me…delicious. Loved the sweet rhyme and sentiment. Lovely start to the day and now I want pizza for breakfast! H🌷
Now this is a poem I can relate to. Pizza and my favorite guy feeding it to me…delicious. Loved the sweet rhyme and sentiment. Lovely start to the day and now I want pizza for breakfast! H🌷
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12th Feb 2022 11:16am
Wow! I just posted this right now! Talk about making my day. What wonderful comments! Pizza is one of my favorite things to eat! I think I am getting hungry for some right now myself...lol. Thank you H!
Re. Pizza By The Slice
12th Feb 2022 11:18am
You had me... at pizza... nicely done Faith... smooth flow... love the weaving rhyme...
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Anonymous
13th Feb 2022 00:11am
Lucky Her!!!
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13th Feb 2022 11:43pm
Yes! Great hearing from you! Thank you for the honor of being placed on your reading list. It means a lot to me.
Re. Pizza By The Slice
13th Feb 2022 5:12am
Whew, I had to sip some water after this! Maybe I was reading too much into the idea of more than pizza. Anyway, the saltiness of your sweet words made me thirsty. Thank you for adding this new poem.
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13th Feb 2022 12:08pm
Thank you for your wonderful remarks. You are very perceptive! Your imagination took you to the right place. When I was writing this poem, I used the pizza (since it's food) as a symbol of love and all that goes along with it. I wanted to imply this instead of saying it out right. Loved your feedback on my poem.
Re. Pizza By The Slice
13th Feb 2022 10:40pm
Yes, one slice at a time...and then more. Great, as usual, write my dear poetic Princess. Hugs and peace, Oral
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