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Death of a Soul

Cold numbness runs through  
Shivers run down my spine  
Hair stands on end  
Chills from my dying soul  

Broken jagged edges  
Stabbing in deeper  
Tears falling like glass  
Bleeding from my soul
Written by Darkwitch3 (PrettyReckle33)
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Author's Note
Hi this is my first poem in a really long time, so please kind constructive criticism. Just going through a rough and confusing time right now and needed and outlet. Thank you for reading!
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