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When We Were Young - So Long Ago

When were were young and were excited
By the male and female view
When you showed your parts to me
And I showed my parts to you

When mine became erected
And was looking at the sky
Your eyes got wide in wonder
You did not hear me question why

You asked if you could touch it
As you had none of you own
I answered the affirmative
And your grip went 'round my bone

Your lips kissed on my dick tip
Your sucking mouth was nice and hot
You consumed my cock with pleasure
As I was playing with your twat

My fingers spread your lower lips
Then explored your sweet abyss
Your down south was getting damper
And with my own lips gave a kiss

It was planted on your clitoris
A great way for us to start
I tasted of your juices
As you spread your legs apart

I took you to orgasm
As I licked from clit to ass
Stuck my tongue deep in your pussy
As I made the second pass

Your body shook, you moaned a bit
Your pulsing pussy shot a stream
“You can stop now and please fuck me”,
Was  much more than just a dream

I stopped my cunnilingus
You stopped your fellatio
I slid my cock deep in your cunt
To begin the fucking show

Your ass was rising to me
Every time I bottomed out
You squeezed and teased my testicles
That made me also scream and shout

Had no idea of where we were
As we fucked the night away
It was getting very serious
And we had only come to play

The speed of our stroking, poking
Increased as we moved along
The friction was increasing
Setting fire to my dong

I felt my balls constricting
As you climaxed on my meat
My semen were then swimming
Towards your all consuming heat

Gone were our energies
No further movements did we find
We had fucked to our exhaustion
Making love had blown our minds

That was over fifty years ago
Those times are running through my mind
I'm looking back with great enjoyment
No greater love was I to find
Written by eightmore
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Author's Note
The love of my life has departed from this earth. My life with her was excellent in every way. She is still here within me and has left me many great memories. No, it wasn't all about sex, but the sex was always great!
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