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90 Proof Hip Swing
Her scent, a neon punctuate
of tequila and stale pall mall was intoxicating.
The way she slid onto the worn dance floor with that 90 proof hip swing, curvy butt and long black curls made me grab hold of my pool cue
She peeled back my facade
exposing the real stuff, she denuded me, perforated my
flesh with her sultry gaze
She was able to do what no one else could ever do
She was the provender of my indulgence
of tequila and stale pall mall was intoxicating.
The way she slid onto the worn dance floor with that 90 proof hip swing, curvy butt and long black curls made me grab hold of my pool cue
She peeled back my facade
exposing the real stuff, she denuded me, perforated my
flesh with her sultry gaze
She was able to do what no one else could ever do
She was the provender of my indulgence
Published 29th Jan 2022
Author's Note
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The phrase 90 Proof Hip Swing was taken from lyrics "Drunk Like You" by
The Cadillac Three
The phrase 90 Proof Hip Swing was taken from lyrics "Drunk Like You" by
The Cadillac Three
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29th Jan 2022 6:38am
29th Jan 2022 12:45pm
Ah, the memories of a dingy dive bar.
Your animalistic hunger for the prey comes through.
Your animalistic hunger for the prey comes through.
