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As We Lay..
The silhouette of your spirit, impels the feverish enrichment of my heart, mind, body, and soul
Minds intermingling in beautiful, undulated chaos
Reminisced longings discarding the barriers of time’s abscond
Partaking in the discovery as we lay
Minds intermingling in beautiful, undulated chaos
Reminisced longings discarding the barriers of time’s abscond
Partaking in the discovery as we lay
Written by
SweetKittyCat5
Published 22nd Jan 2022
| Edited 21st Jan 2024
Author's Note
I feel that there is nothing more truly artistic than to love people.
Vincent Van Gogh
Vincent Van Gogh
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Re. As We Lay..
22nd Jan 2022 10:25am
I like the format you employ here, SKC.
The line lengths give way to a sensual
overflow, out of the format, only to return,
Like the tides or the breathing of a lover...
The imagery, herein, is so vivid and venturing into worshipful,
as you build a temple of the senses and imagination,
Expanding my imagination and senses in the process.
Powerful.
The line lengths give way to a sensual
overflow, out of the format, only to return,
Like the tides or the breathing of a lover...
The imagery, herein, is so vivid and venturing into worshipful,
as you build a temple of the senses and imagination,
Expanding my imagination and senses in the process.
Powerful.
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Re: Re. As We Lay..
23rd Jan 2022 3:36am
You always do know how to pamper the dynamics of an intellect and it is a beautiful blessing to watch it unfold when it pertains to matters of the heart. This worthy praise is no exception my poet
I will humbly bow to you in the grandeur of merit and its acclaim you have bestowed
Thank for reading and adding the aftermath of your conclusion
I am wishing you a great evening as it slowly dwindles and may you have an exalted Sunday in all its lavish rewards
I will humbly bow to you in the grandeur of merit and its acclaim you have bestowed
Thank for reading and adding the aftermath of your conclusion
I am wishing you a great evening as it slowly dwindles and may you have an exalted Sunday in all its lavish rewards
Re: Re. As We Lay..
23rd Jan 2022 2:10am
Thank you, my poetess, for taking the time away from you own beautiful poetic endeavors to scribble your appreciative praise upon mine
Please enjoy the remainder of your evening and have a blessed Sunday
Please enjoy the remainder of your evening and have a blessed Sunday
Re. As We Lay..
22nd Jan 2022 1:12pm
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23rd Jan 2022 3:19am
Well now... I am blushing here on this cold New York evening to have my Big Apple to grace my canvas, a revered poet in his own right to rejoice in my passionate words... and that token of appreciation extends for reading as well
I shall return the homage as time allows...
Please have a safe and sound evening and a glorious Sunday
I shall return the homage as time allows...
Please have a safe and sound evening and a glorious Sunday
Re. As We Lay..
22nd Jan 2022 1:42pm
Re: Re. As We Lay..
23rd Jan 2022 3:05am
What a thoughtful way to look at the concept of my musing; I like that my wandering poet, and thank you for such a generous interpretation.
In as much, I raise my glass to you in poetic respect for reading
Have a fantastic evening and a marvelous Sunday
In as much, I raise my glass to you in poetic respect for reading
Have a fantastic evening and a marvelous Sunday
Re. As We Lay..
22nd Jan 2022 2:31pm
The discovery of partaking...such a beautiful, poetic moment to explore. The heightened intensity plays out nicely in this write.
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Re: Re. As We Lay..
23rd Jan 2022 2:56am
Ahh.. such caressing sentiments from a tender poet always softy engages the corridor of my intellect to explore the realm of time emotionally and spiritually, the duality of any heart's passionate calling to behold
I must thank you, sincerely for taking the required time to have read my poetic serenade... and then adding your flavor to my canvas
Enjoy your evening and stay warm, may you have a wonderful incoming Sunday...always🍑
I must thank you, sincerely for taking the required time to have read my poetic serenade... and then adding your flavor to my canvas
Enjoy your evening and stay warm, may you have a wonderful incoming Sunday...always🍑
Re. As We Lay..
22nd Jan 2022 3:47pm
Re: Re. As We Lay..
23rd Jan 2022 2:35am
An accolade such as that coming from my friend is as priceless as if it was said to me personally my mouth.
Thank you for taking the time to read, I am bidding you an awesome evening and quiet and relaxing Sunday
Thank you for taking the time to read, I am bidding you an awesome evening and quiet and relaxing Sunday
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23rd Jan 2022 12:43pm
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Re: Re. As We Lay..
23rd Jan 2022 2:27am
Your enthalling comment was a poem within the matrix of emotions and beautifully defining the core where desires, ecstasy, becomes the catalyst to blend souls on a higher level of physical euphoric awareness.
Your intuition is keen to the principles of what I call Nirvana's composition. Thank you for reading as well.
On that mindful note, please enjoy your late evening and may you awaken to a magnificent Sunday.
Your intuition is keen to the principles of what I call Nirvana's composition. Thank you for reading as well.
On that mindful note, please enjoy your late evening and may you awaken to a magnificent Sunday.
Re. As We Lay..
23rd Jan 2022 1:17am
Baby one hot picture. I will use a white flower to give you spiritual orgasmic bliss. I'm burning up with passion. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. As We Lay..
23rd Jan 2022 2:14am
I will bow to the respect of such an engaging comment my handsome poet, and very much taken in regality. In addition, thank you for reading
As the evening is sluggishly fading, may you enjoy a relaxing easy breezy Sunday in tow
As the evening is sluggishly fading, may you enjoy a relaxing easy breezy Sunday in tow
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23rd Jan 2022 2:24am
I will enjoy my Sunday. You also enjoy your Sunday and stay safe out there.
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23rd Jan 2022 3:08am
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Re. As We Lay..
28th Jan 2022 11:45pm
Well done again, you don't miss a beat when it comes to lustful writing and I always enjoy it. Maybe I should get some tips from you, lol! No joke you are great at what you do.
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29th Jan 2022 1:17am
Ahh.. thank you, my poetess, however we write from the heart, and express our emotions from the mind. From reading your musings, you hold up your own torch quite beautifully and quite well
And please be advised we learn from each other. The only tip I can ever give anyone is to just write, if you do, they will come...wink
Thank you for taking the time to read my pondering and gracing my canvas with such a heartfelt accolade
Happy New Year to my poetess and please enjoy your evening and have a righteous weekend in the making...
And please be advised we learn from each other. The only tip I can ever give anyone is to just write, if you do, they will come...wink
Thank you for taking the time to read my pondering and gracing my canvas with such a heartfelt accolade
Happy New Year to my poetess and please enjoy your evening and have a righteous weekend in the making...