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CHAIN OF THOUGHTS
What if I was to ask you what is the deepness of your chain of thoughts, what scenes could you create from the darkness of your mind. What if I was to ask you what secrets, would you reveal or even try to HIDE from me, for instance would you reveal to me the truth of who you really are in skin and flesh and blood. What if I was to ask you about your past that reminds you, that deep beneath your mind lock behind a wall of brick and stone. There you are fading away into nothing as There You became, aware of your scars that still didn't heal over time, leaving you pondering aimlessly in the mirror looking at before and after. What if I was to ask you a question, for what if I was to ask you the truth of your chain of thoughts would you reveal, to me that what I see in you or would you reveal to me nothing but the truth about you.
Published 21st Jan 2022
Author's Note
Sometimes we have to ask the hard questions not only of ourselves but of others chain of thoughts..STONEY BAY
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21st Jan 2022 3:24pm
That's probably the scariest thing you can ask of yourself or of another ...Yet, I agree. Stripping bare emotionally, showing one's true colors is paramount for mental health wellness and clarity of mind, body and soul.... are my thoughts!
Terrifically penned ink, wise and sage...
Thank you for sharing your with us, dear Stoney.
Much love and respect,
🌹-B
Terrifically penned ink, wise and sage...
Thank you for sharing your with us, dear Stoney.
Much love and respect,
🌹-B
21st Jan 2022 3:38pm
Thank you for sharing your thoughts about this story book of life for we all go through something's that we as humans don't truly understand for it is necessary to strip away the inner shell of our thoughts and emotions and feelings to get a better understanding of ourselves and be able to be awaken within the subconscious of our minds to have clarity of who we really are deep in the process of learning how to appreciate and accept that we are only human beings who need to adjust to change 🙏👊🦋
28th Jan 2022 11:33pm
I find that most people are afraid to bare their truth especially to those they love due to fear of rejection, being judged, and not wanting to appear weak. Then you have some people who bares too much and it becomes their weakness because they share it with people who are not worthy. Good read by the way
29th Jan 2022 3:00am
Ahhhhhh the process of learning the truth about ourselves is a very interesting thing as it is necessary to understand that sometimes we have to think before you speak to someone who appears to have your best interests at heart for example everyone who you meet aren't your friend that is why you need to get to know someone better 🙏👊🦋
1st Feb 2022 5:07am
So very true last year I walked away from someone I thought was a friend and that's when I realized there was a reason I didn't share everything with her.
1st Feb 2022 12:23pm
True story of how someone can take your kindness as a weakness for always remember even though you can't see the snake in the garden keep in mind that what hides disguise will always be reveal to your eyes 🙏👊😉🦋
