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I, Sea
I break in the cold,
that hallowed bobbing,
envelopes my shaking frame
makes me almost
my own
again.
that hallowed bobbing,
envelopes my shaking frame
makes me almost
my own
again.
Published 17th Jan 2022
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17th Jan 2022 10:00pm
Dear IS,
Like a baptism, the sea. I love this poem as it calls to mind how centered I can be again when in the presence of the ocean. Lovely write. H🌷
Like a baptism, the sea. I love this poem as it calls to mind how centered I can be again when in the presence of the ocean. Lovely write. H🌷
17th Jan 2022 10:03pm
I can feel that numbness of a crisp sea dive. It truly can be a strong sensational experience and I love your presentation of that!
