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in the presence of this one moment
there is nothing more
significant than the
moment one realizes
that we are all completely
and utterly alone inside
of ourselves and everything
else like love, religion, morality
and faith was just an excuse
to avoid living our life and
denying the ordinary fact
that, sooner or later, all
things give way to decay.
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Re. in the presence of this one moment
Anonymous
16th Jan 2022 6:07am
What about friendship?

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Re: Re. in the presence of this one moment
16th Jan 2022 8:43am
Re: Re. in the presence of this one moment
Anonymous
- Edited 16th Jan 2022 7:36pm
16th Jan 2022 7:34pm
Harsh, man. But always true, yes. Without that skill we are lost.

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Re. in the presence of this one moment
16th Jan 2022 11:03am
Dear BK,
It is a singular existence isnt it?
We are each responsible for the outcome of our own destinies. Such an amazing and thought provoking write. H🌷
It is a singular existence isnt it?
We are each responsible for the outcome of our own destinies. Such an amazing and thought provoking write. H🌷
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Re: Re. in the presence of this one moment
16th Jan 2022 12:57pm
Re. in the presence of this one moment
18th Jan 2022 9:22am
I deeply appreciate your ability to look deeply and unflinchingly,
and return with what you return with, raising thought and consciousnesses, in your manner of conveyance.
and return with what you return with, raising thought and consciousnesses, in your manner of conveyance.
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Re: Re. in the presence of this one moment
18th Jan 2022 9:32am
Re. in the presence of this one moment
18th Jan 2022 9:35pm
When all the props are taken away, then what's left (I hope) is a moment's clarity ...
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Re: Re. in the presence of this one moment
19th Jan 2022 1:19am
Re. in the presence of this one moment
21st Jan 2022 9:56pm
We always seek something. I guess in the end, we take nothing with us but memories.
Interesting write.
Interesting write.
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Re: Re. in the presence of this one moment
22nd Jan 2022 1:00am
Im not even sure we take memories w/ us.
Thank you, wally.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you, wally.
hugs,
buddhakitty.