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Symphony of Sorrow
I
Clouds crack in murmur
Releasing a zig zag in ardor
In
Light bright revelation
In musical architecture
Underlying
Inscribing
A shadow
Cast vast
In
Sorrow
Knees in arms
Disarmed
Existence in cumulative harms
Known in endlessness
This
Sorrow in namelessness
II
Im just a stranger in strange
A wanderer in wander
But I wonder
Might I sit with you form to form
And absorb this storm
Basque in this shape shifting in form
Into formlessness
&
Namelessness
This endlessness in transitions of tomorrow
This exquisite nothingness
This
Symphony of Sorrow
Published 11th Jan 2022
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I feel like I need to play The Doors for some reason... then sit back and reread this again....
Your alliteration is hypnotic!
Thank you for putting this out there, Cipher
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Your alliteration is hypnotic!
Thank you for putting this out there, Cipher
🌹 - 💙
x
12th Jan 2022 12:43pm
11th Jan 2022 7:14pm
I agree with Blu, I didn't quite pick on what I enjoyed about this besides your word precision; the alliteration is awesome.
LJ
LJ
12th Jan 2022 12:44pm
