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Sympathy
I never thought I could ever hate you so much
Well, I never thought someone's that dumb
Did you notice that you look pregnant?
I did, so does everyone with eyes
I wouldnt be surprised with you
Considering everything you do
Looking back at your past
And everything you said
you'd think somewhere
in your small brain
you'll stop and
Think about
the things
you do to
me and
find
the
s
y
m
p
a
t
h
y
Well, I never thought someone's that dumb
Did you notice that you look pregnant?
I did, so does everyone with eyes
I wouldnt be surprised with you
Considering everything you do
Looking back at your past
And everything you said
you'd think somewhere
in your small brain
you'll stop and
Think about
the things
you do to
me and
find
the
s
y
m
p
a
t
h
y
Published 7th Mar 2012
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27th Dec 2012 3:21pm
As far as content its somewhat vague and seems very specific and personal, so its kinda hard to comprehend whats happening altough I do get the point of somebody neglecting how you feel as they do foolish things that affect you (that message is universal).
So to comment on format I must say its amazimg. Its consistent with each line getting shorter, no two lines are the same length. May I ask if theres is a name for this style or did you just make it up? I would like to try myself one day.
Good work.
So to comment on format I must say its amazimg. Its consistent with each line getting shorter, no two lines are the same length. May I ask if theres is a name for this style or did you just make it up? I would like to try myself one day.
Good work.
