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Senryu
Swept Away
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Swept Away
being
swept away
by loves torrential rain ~
my
paper
heart floats on
Written by
AspergerPoet56
Published
2nd Jan 2022
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SweetOblivion
2nd Jan 2022 10:57am
Torrential rain, less puissant than life's mess
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buddhakitty
2nd Jan 2022 1:12pm
Excellent.
regards,
buddhakitty.
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TheOralizer
2nd Jan 2022 4:12pm
Absolutely beautiful. A+. LOL, Oral
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Stoney223
(WOLF BAY33)
2nd Jan 2022 5:46pm
Nicely composed 🙏👊
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Bluevelvete
2nd Jan 2022 11:24pm
You're a phenom, Colin!
This is aching, tender, wistful, loving, open, etc etc..
.... my God I can go on and on.... you're so talented at conveying a landscape of emotion, subjective to who might be reading.... It's a gift!
This is a total keeper!
🌹 - 💙
B
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silent_lotus
(silent lotus .)
4th Jan 2022 12:15pm
dear Colin
i like how the two different fonts are like two hands held together
as if they are the voices of two poems in the vortex of oneness
a warm smile
silent lotus
~
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SilkyWords
(Jennifer S Hill)
22nd Jan 2022 6:27pm
Love this..Haiku my favorite kind of poetry.
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