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Wicked pretty
Rainbow ribbons, cotton candy
Sweet innocence can be mighty handy
Whats behind those big blue eyes
Wicked smile
Pretty lies
Sweet innocence can be mighty handy
Whats behind those big blue eyes
Wicked smile
Pretty lies
Published 6th Mar 2012
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6th Mar 2012 8:04am
isn't that how they play us though? with a devilish grin and the most adorning eyes? or a beautiful complexion? at least that's how the stories go... or so I'm told :P
6th Mar 2012 5:59pm
lol so I have heard actually wrote this one for the "short but powerful" contest glad you liked it though nameless
6th Mar 2012 11:01pm
Liked this piece short and powerful is about right here.
Just one question did you mean "innocents" or did you mean the state of innocence?
Just one question did you mean "innocents" or did you mean the state of innocence?
6th Mar 2012 11:04pm
ahhh damn you spell check why do you fail me ..thank you my love I didnt even see that I ment the second innocence ...fixing
6th Mar 2012 11:12pm
6th Mar 2012 11:13pm
7th Mar 2012 12:00pm
this is great >.< it kinda reminds me of a little girl in the state fair and she snot really a little girl... but like a vampire or something.. sorry.. i have a stupid imagination...
7th Mar 2012 8:48pm
11th Mar 2012 11:24am
This one is similar to my own! I love your writing. It's so powerful and intriguing. Please continue writing I really enjoy them!
