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6th Mar 2012 4:44am
Wonderful poem. I've heard the "chilly . . . tree whispering." In your poem I can hear it again. Only suggestion: a period after each sentence would give the poem a sort of sporatic completeness, I think.
marcella1
marcella1
6th Mar 2012 8:22pm
Thank you for your comment and stopping by! I was actually having difficulty deciding on how to punctuate the poem and I like that idea a lot. Thanks!
