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Train

A man gets on a train
Sits and checks his phone
Looks around the place
Notices hes all alone

A voice rings out and says
"Where do you want to go"
"I'm not quite sure" you said
I never really know

The train then stops right there
And the door begins to open
A shadow takes a seat
But nothing ever spoken

It then reveals its face
And you see yourself from the past
You wish you could go back in time
That this moment it could last

But quickly it begins to vanish
And all you see is a box
So you start to open it
But then you hear the clocks

Tick tock, your time is done
You start to sink below
A hand tries to pull you in
But a light inside will glow

Shivering from the fear
The train it stops again
Another shadow enters
Another story will begin

An old man gives you a look
Then tells you a story
Of a broken down man
That couldn't find his glory

He hated himself and his mistakes
Questioned all his choices
Ended up in an asylum
A delirious man hearing voices

He screamed and he screamed
He cried and he yelped
Said that everything was a lie
That he was the devil he felt

This lonely man was me
Eventually it will be you
Unless you change your ways
This is what we turn into

The man then disappears
You start to lose your mind
Trapped in an endless cycle
No one will give a sign
Written by CosiestPrism273 (Jordan Kunkel)
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Author's Note
This is nowhere near perfect but it was interesting to do. I'll probably edit it eventually but it's good enough to be posted.
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